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标题: 求助翻译技巧和心得
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求助翻译技巧和心得

各位大虾,请看看下面的句子, 帮我找几点翻译的技巧,最好是能写出您翻译此段的心得。小女子不胜感激。
 Hunter Hagedorn was not used to waiting. He was a detective sergeant with the city police, and people do not usually keep a cop waiting. However, here ha was pacing the halls of the psychiatric ward of County General Hospital waiting to talk to a patient named Angel Zeno. Outside, the weather darkened along with Hunter’s mood. Looking out the windows, he could see the clouds over the hills bunching like a huge fist. It was going to be a nasty night.
    亨特.哈格道恩不习惯等人。他是市警察署的侦探。一般情况下人们是不会让警官等自己的。然而,现在他正在县医院精神病房的大厅里走来走去。他在等着和一个叫安吉尔.泽诺的病人交谈。外面的天色和哈格道恩的心情一起暗淡下来。他顺着窗外望去,可以看到山上的云像一个巨大的拳头一样集结在一起。这将是一个糟糕的夜晚。
    Angel Zeno kept his innocent face on for the whole 40 minutes the cop spent with him. He knew the woman did. But there was nothing he could do about it. When Hunter finally left, Angel let his facial muscles relax. The cheeks flattened, the pale eyes narrowed, and one corner of his mouth began to twitch.
    安吉尔.泽诺在警察和他在一起的四十分钟里保持着他那张无辜的脸。他知道警察不会和那个女人一样买他的帐。可是他对此也毫无办法。当亨特离去的时候,安吉尔脸上的肌肉松弛下来了。脸颊变平了,苍白的眼珠眯了起来,一只嘴角开始抽搐。
    Everybody betrayed Angel, sooner or later. His parents refused to hide him when he first got into trouble. The teachers always favored the other kids over him. Then Jackie, who had acted as if she were his girl, walked out on him. Well, he had paid back some of there people. But there were others out there who still had it coming.
    每个人都或早或迟的背叛安吉尔。当他第一次遇到麻烦的时候他父亲舅舅拒绝把他藏起来。老师们总是偏爱其他孩子。然后是杰西,她曾经装出一副是他女朋友的样子,可是也抛弃了他。那么,这些人中他已经报复了一部分。可是还有些人的尝尝这味道。
    Outside the window of the hospital room the sun shone brightly. Gail Talley blinked to the window to adjust the blind. Strange faces looked down at her on the bed. A man and a woman, both wearing white jackets, had blank expressions. Another face, this one familiar, showed concern in the deep straight lines. For a moment Gail could not put a name to familiar face. Then she got it.
    医院病房的窗外阳光明媚。这突如其来的明亮光线令盖尔.塔利直眨眼。一个护士赶紧走到窗边调节窗帘。几张陌生的脸俯视着躺在床上的她。一个男人和一个女人,都身着白色夹克衫,面无表情。另有一张熟悉的脸上,又直又深的皱纹里满是关心只情。有一会儿盖尔想不起来这张熟脸孔的名字来。后来她记起来了。
    “I remember running from him,” she said more quickly. “I ran out the back in the rain. He came right behind me. Then, up by the big tree, he caught me. I fought to get away, but he was too strong. Then somebody else came and…” She faltered. “That’s it. I don’t remember anything else until I woke up here a couple of minutes ago. What happened, Hunter?”
    “我记得从他那儿逃开。”她更平静地说道。“我从后门逃出去跑进雨里。他就在后面追我。后来,在上面那大树旁他抓住了我。我挣扎着想逃脱,可他的劲儿太大了。然后有人来了……”她语无伦次。“就这些.我别的什么也不记得了,直到几分钟前在这儿醒过来。发生了什么事,亨特?”

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发表于 2007-11-26 12:40  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者
心得是太长了,翻译小说没做过,回答完毕

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发表于 2007-11-26 12:49  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者
太长了。帮顶。。。。。

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发表于 2007-11-26 17:05  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者
:') :') :') :') :')

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发表于 2007-11-26 17:33  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者
顶一个吧

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发表于 2007-11-26 18:44  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者
我先看了第一段,翻译的不错!!呵呵

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