标题: 大家帮我看看我的公司简介写的怎么样?
sunnyqqman
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大家帮我看看我的公司简介写的怎么样?

Wuxi Direct Scaffolding & Metal hardware Co.,Ltd is China a based scaffolding manufacturer producing steel scaffoldings, steel ladder ,modular system scaffolds and steel hardwares.established as a manufacturing company in the year of 1998 with rich experiences on scaffolding custom design production. Our company once as a major
scaffolding equipment supplier to construction equipments import and export companies in Chinese mainland. Now, we are determined to offer our products and professional services directly to customers around the world with superior quality, sincere service and the best possible price.
Our aim: Quality, service, total customer'satisfaction.

Direct scaffold manufacturing a series of frame scaffolds, modular system scaffold, scaffold board, bracing, steel ladders and accessories for your scaffolding total needs. Weather it's interior or exterior work as well as the needs of top contractors around the world. Weather you need to stand something above 10'tall or 25 stories high, we can deliver the material to get your job done safely.

All of our products meet or exceed international and American ANSI and OSHA standards and
regulations.

Take a look at our products and compare the quality and price and you will find the best.

Direct Scaffolding, Direct Factory Supply.

www.direct-scaffold.com

写的怎么样?有什么地方需要完善的多提意见了啊 





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billzha (阿喳 通吃阎王)
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勇气可嘉······顶顶····俺从不写





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发表于 2008-1-14 13:29  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者 添加 sanold 为MSN好友 通过MSN和 sanold 交谈


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原帖由 sunnyqqman 于 2008-1-14 12:58 发表
Wuxi Direct Scaffolding & Metal hardware Co.,Ltd is China a based scaffolding manufacturer producing steel scaffoldings, steel ladder ,modular system scaffolds and steel hardwares.established as  ...

第一句里面的“China a based....“弄个china在那里是什么意思。
下一句改成in  the year 1998  with rich experiences in.........
再下一句as前面最好加个acted...不然无端端弄个AS在那里却没有后文。。
....其它的,最好找个高手改顺点。我没那水平。
看到长段的英文就怕。





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pupopo (随时失踪的朴儿)
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发表于 2008-1-14 13:55  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者 添加 pupopo 为MSN好友 通过MSN和 pupopo 交谈 QQ
不怎么样。。。 中式英语。。。看得不太懂!你还是中英都发上来吧,好对着看。

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Jackie_Chang
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网页做的不错

英文不知道 肯定比我好





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呵呵,我们公司正要找个翻译公司翻译公司简介呢!老总特别强调要专业翻译公司,嘿嘿!

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pupopo (随时失踪的朴儿)
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发表于 2008-1-14 14:55  资料  个人空间  个人短信  加为好友  只看该作者 添加 pupopo 为MSN好友 通过MSN和 pupopo 交谈 QQ
给#6楼
多少钱?多少字?什么行业? 个人可以吗??

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sscute
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回复 #7 pupopo 的帖子

你报价啊,电子行业,多少字啊,一两千字吧,不多的

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