2009-2-3 23:10 MARKYANMA
外贸函电

在学习外贸函电,  决定在论坛上也发一下,  争取每天都学习,每天都发些,
有需要翻译的请告诉我, 我更新上来,
[b]付款部分[/b]
Urging Establishment of Letter of Credit

Dear Sirs,
         According to the stipulation of our S/C, your covering L/C should have reached us before the end of last month.  We regret to note that up to the present we haven't received it yet.  Please expedite the establishment of the relevant L/C upon receipt of this letter so that we may effect shipment in time as stipulated.
         In order to avoid subsequent possible amendments, please see to it that the L/C stipulations are in conformity with those of the Sales Confirmation.
         Looking forward to receiving your favourable news in the shortest possible time.

                                                                           Your faithfully,




Refusing Belated L/C

Dear Sirs,

                      Re: Sales Contract No. 6837
     We regret to note that you have failed to establish your L/C against S/C No.6837 as required.  You did not even give us a reply in spite of our repeated reminders.  But, to our great surprise, today we are informed by our bank of the arrival of a L/C from you while the stipulated limit has been long over.
     As drastic changes have taken place in the market situation, it is impossible for us to execute the above contract, which we have treated as cancelled.  Therefore, your L/C No. 4692 has been returned through the bank.
    In addition, we would like to advise that if you guarantee to open your L/C according to the deadline stipulation in future., we will still be willing to take up your fresh orders.

                                                                                                                                                          Yours truly,

Notes

belated
reminder
drastic
execute
guarantee sth to do sth  that  clause
deadline
take up fresh orders


Requesting Extension of L/C

[b]Gentleman:[/b]

                          Re: Extension of L/C
         Thank you for your L/C No.2351 covering your order for 20,000 metres of printed shirting.  We regret to notice that, due to some delay on the part of our manufacturers, we are unable to get the goods in question ready before the end of March.  The earliest shipment we can arrange is just in the middle of April.
         For the above reason, we sent you a cable this morning reading:  L/C NO. 2351 PLSEXTEND BYCABLE SHIPDATE APRIL 16 VALIDITY APRIL 30.  We are sure that you will give us cooperation by extending the shipment date to April 16, and the negotiation validity to April 30 respectively.
        We feel sorry for the inconvenience caused by our delay in delivery.

                                                                                 
                                                                                                                                      Your faithfully,
Notes
extension
extend
extensive
printed shirting  印花细布
on the part of /on one's part    就什么而言,  在....一边
discreditable
clergyman
in question 正被讨论的,
negotiation
respectively
inconvenience

Documents against Payment (D/P)

Dear Sirs,

         We are very thankful to you for informing us that the goods under Contract No. 791 were shipped in good time on May 10.
         We would like to notify that in compliance with the Contract stipulation, we have made full payment for these goods and acquired a complete set of shipping documents upon presentation by the bank of China.  The Bank of China will inform the collection band at your place to that effect.
         As to the condition of goods, we shall communicate with you after inspection is made.
                        
                                                                            Yours truly,

Notes
document against payment
in compliance with
acquire
acquisition
presentation
collection bank
collection agent
collection bill
to that effect  谈到那点
communicate

Agreeing to D/P payment

[b]Gentelman:[/b]

        We wish to acknowledge receipt of your cable dated 9th instant regarding the terms of payment.
        In view of the amount of this transaction being very small, we are prepared to accept payment by D/P at sight (at 60 days' sight) for the value of the goods shipped.  We trust this will greatly facilitate your efforts in sales.
        We hope that D/P payment will result in a considerable increase of your orders and assure you that we shall always endeavour to execute them to your complete satisfaction.

                                              Yours truly,

Notes
instant
in view of
at sight
with a view to
at 60 days' sight

Documents against Acceptance  (D/A)

Dear Sirs,

         We acknowledge receipt of your letter of July 3rd under your reference JS6273, which arrived this morning, and wish to thank you for your kind cooperation in timely shipment of our order.
         We are surprised that you still demand payment by D/P.  After many years of satisfactory trading we feel that we are entitled to easier terms of payment.  Most  of our suppliers are drawing on us at 60 d/s, documents against acceptance. and we should be grateful if you could grant us the same terms.
         We are looking forward to your favourable reply.

                                                     Yours faithfully,
Notes

documents against acceptance
timely
entitle
entitle sb to sth
be entitled to do sth


Agreeing to 60 d/s, D/A terms

Dear Sirs,

         According to contract No. HXF6251, your order has been shipped today by s.s " Tisnan" from Qingdao.
         As to payment, in consideration of the very pleasant business relationship we have had with your film for more than 10 years, we have decided to agree to your suggestion.  We are willing to supply you in future on 60 d/s, D/A terms and trust that these terms will suit your requirements.
         It is our belief that 60 d/s terms will not only promote long and friendly business between us, but also lead to a series of large dealings in the near future.

                                                                Yours truly,

Notes
60 d/s, D/A terms
in consideration of
on 60 d/s, D/A terms
suit
suit sth to sb
be suited for / to
suitable for /to

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2009-2-4 08:08 dixmont2233
thanks for sharing

2009-2-4 08:21 安安叔叔
:( :(   翻译一下好么,我英语实在差的说............

2009-2-4 08:29 lesley1
谢得很好啊. 我看别人写得都是彬彬有礼的,可是我却写不好,我总觉得我写得不够亲切.

2009-2-4 08:30 kylin007
坚持就是胜利。。。。:handshake

2009-2-4 08:59 xue9918
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2009-2-4 09:35 gavinrao
我也要翻译>>>><

2009-2-4 14:24 lydiaben
外贸新人,工作中还接触不到这些东西:Q

2009-2-4 19:20 MARKYANMA
第二:
Reference Expression

Payment is to be made against sight draft drawn under a confirmed, irrevocable, divisible and transferable Letter of Credit without recourse for the full amount.

To cover our shipment, we request you to establish an 100% value, Confirmed and irrevocable L/ C with partial shipment and transshipment  allowed clause, available by draft at sight, against surrendering the full set of shipping documents to the negotiation bank here.

As agreed, a Letter of Credit should be opened for a total of US$31900 covering the FOB price plus ocean freight, stipulating shipment by 31 August.  The credit expires on 15th September.

Please note that the terms of payment for the above orders are letter ( s ) of credit of 60 days' sight or D/P sight draft.  We regret we cannot accept "cash against documents on arrival of goods at destination".

In order to cover ourselves for this shipment, we have drawn on the Bank of India at sight for Stg. 24600 under their L/C No. FR 160 and negotiation it through the Bank of China, Beijing.  The shipping documents are to be surrendered ( or delivered)  upon payment of the draft at your end.

The beneficiaries have written to us to the effect that they are without the L/C  to this date.  Please do your utmost to ensure the payment without  delay.

From your letter of 4th June, we learn that the L/C has been arranged, but we regret to say that we have received no banker's advice yet.  Please push the confirming house in San Francisco for their soonest action.

Your order was confirmed by cable of May 15, subject to arrival of credit within 15-day period having expired on June 1st without receipt of L/C nor hearing any further advice from you, we cabled you today asking when the required L/C had been opened.

We regret that we would not ship the goods by a March vessel only because of the delay of your L/C.  We would request you to take up this matter with the issuing bank at once and let us know what has become of the letter of credit, otherwise, contrary to our intention, the shipment may be delayed a great deal.

As we have placed a further order with our suppliers, will you please increase the credit to US$11250 in accordance with attached instruction.

Please amend (adjust )L/C No.130 as follows.
    1. Amount to be increased up to sterling 24310.
    2. Validity to extended up to 15th November.
    3. The words "Transshipment Not Allowed" are to be deleted.

To our regret, the L/C we have received this date is found not properly amended.  Again, we must ask you to refer to our letter of July 25 in which our request was made to you regarding the following clause to be amended.

We request you to see if that L/C is opened by cable whenever order is placed with us.  The letter of credit should be established with its clauses in conformity with the terms and conditions of the contract.

As informed you by cable, the sailing of s.s. "princess cecily" was cancelled because of serious damage she sustained while at the berth in Hongkong.  This has made us unable to ship the goods within the life time of L/C which expires on August 8.  Under the circumstances, we earnestly hope that you will extend the credit to the end of this month.

It is a matter of regret to advise you that the L/C valid until 30th March for Order No.TK902 because unusable owing to the fact that the careless mistake in the dyeing process necessitated our restart for manufacture.  Please give us one more month for the completion of the goods and instruct your bankers for the extension of validity with ample time for enabling us to negotiate the draft under the credit.

We shall be willingly allowing you the extension of 60 days upon suggestion by you, and earnestly hope that it will help you out of your present embarrasment.

In view of the amount of this transaction being very small, we are prepared to accept payment by D/P at sight( at 60 days' sight) for the value of the goods.

We will draw on you by our documentary draft at sight on collection basis.

In compliance with your request, we exceptionally accept delivery against D/P at sight, but this should not be regarded as a precedent.

It will interest you to know that as a special sign of encouragement, we shall consider accepting payment by D/P during this sales pushing stage.  We trust this will greatly facilitate your efforts in sales, and we await your favourable reply.

We are pleased to confirm that each shipment will be separately charged and that we shall draw on you for the invoice amount.

According to the terms agreed upon, we have drawn on you at 30 days' sight for the amount of the enclosed invoice.

Your proposal to pay by draft is acceptable to us and we shall accordingly draw on you at 2 months from date of shipment of your order.

As arranged, we have drawn on you for payment of the invoice amount US$ 29860 and documents have been delivered to Midland Bank of this city as instructed.

In accordance with the terms of payment ( agreement) we have drawn on you at sight against this shipment through Bank of China here.  We ask you to protect the draft upon presentation.

We enclose invoice for your Order No. HK541 which we shipped yesterday per s.s "sunrise".  Meanwhile, kindly give out draft due honour when presented to you from your bankers.

We propose to pay by Bill of Exchange at 30 d/s, documents against acceptance (D/A) .  Please confirm if this is acceptable to you.

Your draft for the shipment by s.s " shanghai" was presented yesterday and duly met.  We should now like to ask you if you are willing to supply us in future on 60 d/s, D/A terms, as other suppliers in your country are already allowing us the credit.

As to payment, our Bankers in Tokyo, the First National Bank, will accept your draft on them on our behalf.

As arranged, your draft of 10th July has been accepted and will be given our protection.  

Your draft on us for US$8160 in favour of Frank Company has been accepted, but will you please note that such drafts should be advised in future?

We hand you enclosed documents as listed below covering our shipment per s.s." prince"with a draft at 60 d/s for stg. 26020 on Robeson Trading company.  Please surrender these documents to the drawee against their accepting the draft.  At due date please collect and remit the net proceeds to us.

We have pleasure in advising you that your Order NO. AK 6203 was despatched per s.s. " rose' on May 15th and you should receive the goods within three weeks.  Our draft on you at 30 d/s in favour of White Company will be presented by the Commercial Bank, singapore, and we ask you to give it your protection.

Kindly send us 2 Bills of Lading by separate posts, together with your draft at 30 days for acceptance.

The goods invoiced by you on September 29 have now safely arrived and are found satisfactory.  In settlement of the amount of your invoice, less 5% discount, we enclose a cheque (money order) for US $23800.  Please acknowledge receipt by return mail.

Will you please let us have your cheque for the amount of the enclosed statement.

To ensure prompt shipment, we enclose a bank draft for US $ 12800, being the amount less 2% discount.

Your request for open account terms has been considered and we are pleased to grant this facility.  We would, however, prefer to draw a sight bill on you quarterly in favour of the Export Bank of Singapore, and we hope this will be agreeable to you.

Your statement of our account for the last quarter has been received and found correct.  We have instructed our bank to remit the amount of US$ 16500 for the credit of your account at the Mercantile Bank, New York.

We would suggest that, for this trial order, you let us have a demand draft or a postal money order, on receipt of which, we shall ship the goods on the first available steamer.  By so doing, you could save bank charges for opening an L/C.

Many thanks for your proforma invoice.  We accept this price and are making immediate payment to our bank, who will notify you of hte credit in due course.

We have today instructed our Bank, the Far East Corporation, to remit the amount due by telegraph.  Please acknowledge receipt.

[b][size=6]Shipment[/size][/b]运输部分

urging shipment of goods overdue

Gentleman,:   
                                  Subject: Our order No. 918/contract No.8692
        We refer to Contract NO.8692 signed between us on 10th november, 1997 for 5000 cases Tin Plates, which is stipulated for shipment in February, 1998.  However, up to the time of writing we have not received from you any information about the order in question.  As you know, the contracted time of delivery is rapidly falling due and we should have received your shipping advice by the end of last month.
        No doubt there must have been some reason for the delay in shipping and to cover this contingency we cabled you that we were extending the Letter of Credit to the end of March.  We feel sure we shall soon be hearing from you about this business.
        Awaiting your reply, we are.
   
                                                      Yours truly,
Notes

overdue
up the time of /up to the time when=till
contracted time
due
     fall due
     due to do sth
     due for
     due to
should have + past participle
Must have  +  past participle
contingence
(P.S. 英镑的英文未完全输入正确, 请谅解)

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2009-2-4 20:05 josephheller
grerat! it's exactly what i need right now.it's practical.

2009-2-4 20:59 devan008
是,是要好好学学了,

2009-2-4 21:01 xue9918
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2009-2-5 20:54 MARKYANMA
A Reply to the above letter
Dear Sirs,
         We are in receipt of your letter dated 8th instant, contents of which have been duly noted.  We thank you for your kind cooperation in providing the necessary amendment to your L/C.
         We must apologize for the delay in delivery your order, which has been caused by the unexpected late arrival of the goods from the place of origin.
         Now the shipment has been arranged to go forth on board s.s. " Seagull", which is scheduled  to sail for your port early next month.  We shall, of course, not fail to cable you details of the shipment as soon as the goods are placed on board the steamer.
         It is sincerely hoped that our delay in communicating with you on the above order has caused you no trouble and that shipment will turn out  to your entire satisfaction.
                                         Your faithfully,

Notes
be in receipt of = receive
place of origin
go forth
on board
schedule
shall not fail to do sth = shall do sth
turn out to one's satisfaction

Shipping instruction

Dear Sirs,
         We acknowledge receipt of your telegram of 15th February, form which we understand that you have booked our order for three Model 590 precision grinding machines.
         Our Confirmation of Order will be sent to you in a few days.
         Since the transaction is made on FOB basis, you are to ship the goods from London on a steamer we designate.  As soon as the shipping space is booked, we shall inform you of the name of steamer, on which the goods are to go forward.  For further instructions, please contact our forwarding agents, Messrs.  Brown Company, London, who have hitherto been in charge of shipping from you.
         As some parts of the machines may be damaged easily by shock, the machines must be packed in seaworthy cases capable of withstanding rough handling.  The bright metal parts should be protected from dampness in transit by a coating of slushing compound that will keep out dampness, but will not liquefy and run off under changing weather condition.
         We believe that the above instructions are very clear to you and hope that the users will be entirely satisfied with the shipment.
                                                                        
                                                              Yours truly,

Notes
shipping instruction
precision grinding machine
confirmation of order
make a transaction on FOB basis
shipping space
Forwarding
forwarding agency
forwarding agent
forwarding country 发送国
forwarding operation
hitherto
be in charge of
shock
seaworthy
withstand
damp
dampness
transit
transition
transitional
coat
coating
slush
compound
   slushing compound 抗蚀润滑脂
keep out
run off

Requesting Postponement of Shipment

Gentleman:
        In regard to the first shipment against our Contract No. 6209, we wrote you on 5th instant that part of the goods was not in conformity with the contracted specifications.  We requested you to give us explanations and advise us how you would deal with the matter, but up to now we have not yet received any reply.
        So we regret to declare that we can not bind ourselves to accept the second lot of goods which is to be delivered by the end of next month until the quality problem has been settled satisfactorily.  We have to request that you should postpone shipment of this shipment for the time being. It goes without saying that we  have no obligations whatever in this matter.
         Meanwhile, we are still looking forward to your reply.

                                      Yours fatithfully,

Notes
postpone
postponement
postponable
in regard to
the first shipment against our Contract No. 6209
in conformity with (to)
up to now
declare
  declaration
  declarable
bind
for the time being
It goes without saying that
Shipping Advice
Dear Sirs,
         We have the pleasure of informing you that the following four orders have today been shipped on board the m.v. EASTERN JEWEL just as previously arranged:
         Order No. W -8711
         Order No. W -8712
         Order No. W -8713
         Order No. W -8714
         The EASTERN JEWEL is to sail from the port of Dalian to Sydney, and we hope that it will reach your port safely without delay, with all the goods in good condition.
         Enclosed please find one set of the shipping documents covering these consignments, as follows:
         1) one non-negotiable copy of B/L,
         2) Invoice in duplicate,
         3) Packing List in triplicate,
         4) one copy of Manufacturers' Certificate of Quality,
         5) one copy of Insurance Policy.
                           
                                                                                 Yours very truly,
Notes
shipping advice
Enclosed please find sth
non-negotiable
copy of B/L
invoice in duplicate
packing list in triplicate
manufacturers' certificate of quality
insurance policy

Reference Expressions

According to the terms of the contract the shipment is to be effected by the 15th May and we must have the Bs/L by the 20th at the latest, We trust that you will make all necessary arrangements to deliver the goods in time.

We impressed on you that the need for urgency and we must ask you to cable by return and tell us what the position.  We rely on you to execute this order to the entire satisfaction of our customers and with the least possible delay.

As the date of shipment is further extended, we believe there will be no difficulty in getting the goods despatched in time.

Please furnish us with your assurance that the goods will be put on board the s.s."KMARU" within the contracted timelimit by all possible means, otherwise dead freight, if any, should be borne by you.

It is important that shipment be made before the end of this month. If not, you should be responsible for any loss that might be caused by the delay of shipment.

Because the long delay in delivery has caused us considerable inconvenience and financial loss, we request you to deliver the goods immediately, otherwise we shall be compelled to cancel the orders in accordance with the stipulations of the contrast.

Please deliver our Order No. 6288 for chemical fertilizer per s.s."WEIMIN' with ETA the 5th August at Rottteridam and confirm by return that the goods will be ready in time.  For detailed delivery instructions, please approach Messrs. Lombard Bros. Co., London.

Please delver 500 pieces of Canvas Folding Chairs with Wooden Frame under our Order No. 1182 per s.s."Morning Star" sailing from Hongkang on or about 20th August and due to arrive at Panama on or about 10th September.

2009-2-6 09:33 fuyinsheng
楼主很勤奋好学啊,顶一个

2009-2-6 09:36 我有我理想
那么长,都不想看鸟:lol :lol

2009-2-6 16:37 MARKYANMA
算了,不发了,留给自己了,

2009-2-6 16:46 linda--686
楼主,等着你的跟新哦。
加油!!!

2009-2-7 16:51 lindaliu0221
留个记号,以后有时间慢慢看...

2009-2-7 18:35 兔宝宝
学习学习了 函电是要好好的看 写的专业点啊

2009-2-10 11:08 flory
不错,读的我口干舌燥了:) 感谢,很好

2009-2-10 11:11 flory
[quote]原帖由 [i]MARKYANMA[/i] 于 2009-2-6 16:37 发表 [url=http://bbs.fobshanghai.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=22192198&ptid=1639961][img]http://bbs.fobshanghai.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
算了,不发了,留给自己了, [/quote]

怎吗能不发呢??让人家学习一下多好!

2009-2-10 11:15 vivian86910
我去家里把那书给找出来。呵呵。。。

现在觉得写邮件都写得特简单。呼。。。

2009-2-10 12:20 zengerwise
继续啊!我们都在学习呢!

2009-2-10 13:26 kanwairen686
写的是好啊,我看来要好好的学习学习,差距太大了
:')

2009-2-10 13:54 landonbing
谢谢楼主

楼主英文不错,谢谢共享!:lol

2009-2-10 14:33 dzqd
[quote]原帖由 [i]flory[/i] 于 2009-2-10 11:11 发表 [url=http://bbs.fobshanghai.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=22276831&ptid=1639961][img]http://bbs.fobshanghai.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]


怎吗能不发呢??让人家学习一下多好! [/quote]
这算 XXXX???

2009-2-10 14:50 jane0822
翻到总是能瞄到一些新鲜的词语。。。留个记号

2009-2-10 16:08 mirandawl
写的太好了,觉得自己很差劲啊!

2009-2-10 16:29 marinacsq
thank you so much for sharing :)

2009-2-10 17:37 MARKYANMA
不是我写的,是我在学习的书上的,
看到论坛上好多关于函电的,不过感觉这个好点, 所以想把它传上来,
非本人所作.
多谢各位捧场,有空定跟过来,

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