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2008-7-4 16:19
mydream123
appreciate your courage and learn a lot from your experience
you english is good while it's just my lack
my job just as your A company: small , but now i chose to stay for further development
hope things will be better and better in the near future
2008-7-8 23:40
qjh_cn
I quited my job lask week .i have kept working for four years without any vocation and holidays. now,i give myself a vocation to recharge , to think about my future
2008-7-9 11:14
lifenzhou
楼主之所以很容易就能找到工作,英语帮了大忙,既然你很满意现在的工作就塌实的做下来.能学到很多东西的.
2008-7-12 15:36
caixiaqin
good guy
Wang, your aritcle is very good for it fluency and sincere. I have been a foreign trade sale as 1 years, your words :,"Do what you want to do, dream what you want to dream,go wherever you want to go. Because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do ." is very nice for me. Thanks a lot
2008-10-8 22:28
jessicaren
I have engaged in the foreign trade line for two years
Also i experienced many difficulties during the time
We should face the them
your english is very well
2008-10-8 23:02
ceohuapeng
路虽远,行则必至;事虽难,做则必成!
2008-10-9 10:20
colinlicl
You are qualified to quit your job,someone like me is even hard to find one.admiring you.
2008-10-9 10:35
bobo0829
Do what you want to do, dream what you want to dream,go wherever you want to go. Because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do ." i will do ....
2008-10-10 09:14
Joy_2008
Great shareing...
2008-10-14 20:46
wangliang3181
i love this field very much,and may best wishes to all those engaged in foreign trade ,its really a
great fun
2008-10-14 21:40
juimica
Your English is excellent.Thank you for sharing so many experiences and feeling with us,which make me feel ashamed,cause my English is very poor.
Actually,I have ever the same experience as you,and I also quit the job in Aug,and now I'm working in the international purchase department of a company,
althrough I don't konw whether I will meet the same situation as last job,but I will try all my best to learn the most knowledge in the shortest period.
Let us never give up!
2008-10-14 21:50
dallaswjh
楼主,你的英文还有待加强!
[没想到你这片文章竟然有那么多人说好,看来这论坛上的很多外贸从业人员英文水平也有待加强啊
你的文笔上太多chinglish,估计你的英文水平应该还没达到8级水平,应该说连6级的水平都有点勉强.如果考6级或者八级的资格的话,估计你会在语法上面失掉很多分数.
你整篇文章有很多语法错误.
而且很多用词不当
以下举一下例子:(蓝色是错误的地方,红色是更改正确的)
All these days I am [color=Blue]so busy[/color](用[color=Red]I am keeping busy[/color] 比较好) and don’t have any time to write down my feelings ,but today as our int’l dept manager [color=Blue]have[/color] ([color=Red]has[/color])gone to USA on business,[color=Blue]so[/color](不该加"[color=Red]so[/color]" I have time at my own disposer,hehe…
Ever (应该去掉"ever")since I came to shanghai to find a job,I have being busy(应该是"[color=Red]been busy [/color]")like a bee,going to job market,having interviews[color=Blue],finding place to live and eat[/color](换成"[color=Red]find places to relocate and food to feed up myself)[/color]" and [color=Blue]what’s more[/color] ([color=Red]用'moreover 或者" as well as [/color]")dealing with my parents and bro’s [color=Red]worry[/color]("担心"应该是"[color=Red]concern[/color]",不是worry), you can hardly imagine how I felt at that [color=Blue]time[/color](用[color=Red]moment[/color]更地道) ,the difficulty was beyond my expectation,not the job itself,but as you see,shanghai is really (add [color=Red]"a[/color] ")large city ,sometimes it’s very hard to locate yourself…if you pay little attention to it,you will find yourseltf [color=Red]be [/color]in nowhere.([color=Red] be [/color]应该是去掉
下面我就不再说了,你其他地方也有很多类似的问题.如果你想精益求精的话,我建议你可以参加一下商务英语的学习班,加强一下. 如果只是想做简单的外贸业务员,就足够了
关键你想学好的话,很简单,你多留意欧美人的邮件,注意他们的用词,然后copy下来,以后你就把他们常用的句子copy下来,加上你的意思灵活运用就会比较地道了.
不过说一下,你的文笔逻辑和思路是不错的,有些词也用得比较有文采.只是解决一下以上问题的比较好.
冒犯之处,还望海涵.
[[i] 本帖最后由 dallaswjh 于 2008-10-14 22:32 编辑 [/i]]
2008-10-14 22:16
job04
楼主不是英文专业毕业的,能写出这样的文章已经很不错了,72楼的不用太吹毛求疵了,看得出来你也是要热心帮助楼主的人,呵呵。
2008-10-15 09:17
dhlgyan
大家都很厉害啊,我还在自己的岗位上打持久战,继续战斗ING~
2008-10-15 11:02
susan2010
Do what you want to do, dream what you want to dream,go wherever you want to go. Because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do .--Sounds great:)
I want to quit the job,but I am afraid it's hard to find a new job again.
And my salary now is very good.So I am hesitate between my dream and a steady life. Mind think alike ¬ like a saying of Boxie: If it weren’t Bush to keep me working extra hours, could you ever see me standing here every day?!':lol
2008-10-17 11:11
yiyou85
Keep learing~~~
2008-10-17 13:30
shiny1985
you are so talented,i will learn from you!!
2008-10-17 17:24
dorise
good boy!:victory:
2008-10-21 15:21
spring0413
i read your article, however, i can not understand it wholly. in last paragraph,there is a sentence like this: after working in the two company for a short time ,I made a comparison. my dear, how can you working in two companies at the same time? i really appreciate you
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