关于工业旅游的翻译资料，请高手指点！

工业旅游”是近几年开始流行的一个新名词。随着经济的快速增长和人民生活水平的提高,它作为一种新型的旅游形式和经济增长点在我国已悄然兴起。但由于我国的工业旅游起步较晚,目前尚处于初期阶段。人们对其还缺乏科学的认识和系统的研究。但具有非常大的发展潜力,对游客来说它是一个新看点，对于企业来说它是一个新卖点，能够达到游客、企业双赢的目的。但如何使其从一开始就能得到规范而健康的发展,成为具有独特魅力的旅游产品,是值得我们全面思考的问题。本文拟对国内外工业旅游的认识进行初步探讨,对国内工业旅游的发展现状和存在问题加以分析和思考，并以泸州老窖工业旅游示范点为例，对工业旅游的发展思路作了进一步研究。

[[i] 本帖最后由 tinalijing 于 2008-5-12 21:55 编辑 [/i]]

“Industrial tourism” is the popular words in recent years. According the speedy improvement of the economy and life level, It start as a new tourism type and the improvement point of the economy in our country. At present it is just in the junior time because of the late start. People is lack of scientific knowledge and systemic research of it。But it has a large space to expand. It is a new point for the tourists, and a new sales point for the enterprise. It can make profits for both of the tourists and enterprise. How to make it regular and healthy to develop and become a special tourism product? It is a problem to overall thinking. This article just wants to discuss the knowledge of the Industrial tourism domestic and abroad, analyzes and think of the domestic develop status and present problem. We also want to deep research the develop ideas of the industrial tourism for the example of the Luzhou Laojiao Wine Industrial Tourism.

这是我翻译的，不过我不是很满意，请高手指点一下！

这是别人让我帮忙翻译的，我也不知道从哪儿弄到的。可能都太忙了，没人理我。

其实你翻译的蛮好的了~
生活水平：
<精>  living standard  生活水平

<精>  quality of life (QOL)  生活水平; 生活质量法

初期：

<精>  early in its development  初期

<精>  early stage  早期; 初期

<精>  first stage  初期

<精>  incipience  初期

<精>  incipient stage  初期; 初生始阶段; 初始阶段; 开始阶段

<精>  primary stage  初期

<精>  stage of introduction (指产品寿命)  初期

Industrial tourism is a new popular word in recent years. With the development of the economy and life level, it is rising quietly as a new touring style and Economic growth point in china. Due to its late step, our industrial tourism is in primary stage lack of the scientific and system research. However, It has a huge potential as a new aspect for tourists and selling point for corporation. It can also make both profits on tourists and corporations.
我试着翻译了半段,看看可以吗?哪位指导一下

"Industrial tourism" is a new word which pops recently. With the economic in good going and living conditions better, it sprouts out as a new tourism form and economic support in our country. Due to its domestic late beginning, a primary stage, it is short of scientific acquaintance and systematic research. But it has great potential, a new tour site for tourists, a new product for companies, win-win for both parties. Yet it would be an overall question for us that how to develop it under control and robust, and a special attracting tour product from the onset.
This article is planning to probe into know of industry, of domestic and/or oversea, researching and thinking the status quo and questions of home-grown industry tourism, taking Luzhou Laojiao as a sample one, making a further step for its developing ways.