2008-5-9 20:20 乖乖小妖
distance

The distance is imaginative but you are so close
How far you may be, you are in my mind that gives me hope 。
As I wake up in the morning I feel your presence
And the sun reminds me that we live on the same earth
I know you will come to me soon 。
Even though now the distance from me to you ,
Is further away than from the sun to the moon
It gives me comfort that I know you are there  

I have dreams and wishes I know will come true
Even if my letter will be sent out in the sky so blue
I dream tonight that you hold my hand ,
When i am your girl and you are my man


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2008-5-9 20:42 鱼美人
写得真好。。。。真的很不错。

2008-5-9 20:47 suuny610
pretty good ,very beautifuly sentence, i  am appreciate it very much !

2008-5-9 20:52 gambler
不错不错,还有些押韵呢。

2008-5-9 21:05 daisongbai
your english is really very good, i am envious of it.

2008-5-9 21:10 xugz_666
“When i am your girl and you are my man”

改成“When you are my girl and I am your man”:lol

2008-5-9 22:39 乖乖小妖
:$ :$   不是我写的哈,...

我朋友写的,我偷来的...

怎么会跑到原创板块啊 :funk:

2008-5-10 16:21 sophielover
I especially appreciate the last four sentences, so fabulous..

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